Saturday, 31 July 2010

Cocoon

Wishing soft for silken wrapping
Layered binding, clean and hidden
As I surrender usual systems
Allowing death of self.




Response to 'cocoon', the prompt this week at OSI

8 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

Oh to be hidden and to surrender and come back new and light. Lovely, lovely poem.

Amity said...

Beautifully cocooned words, Julia...:)

If only...

Ramesh Sood said...

No you don't have to. trust me..

SisterJulia said...

Mmmm new and light does sound good Sandy...hope you are having a lovely time away:)

Thank you Amity...yes, a little cocooned time out, if only!

And Ramesh :) I rarely trust a man who says 'trust me':P ...but I am wondering what you mean...

Harshad mehta said...

Surrender usual systems
allowing death?

I think not.

Death is Yes - in any case.

Tumblewords: said...

Intriguing piece! Nice work!

gabrielle said...

imagine a place so soft, so hidden, that it is safe to release all that is prepared to fall like petals, like rain.

Beautiful, beautiful poem!

SisterJulia said...

:D Harshad...allowing the little death maybe:)

Thank you Tumblewords

Gabrielle!
yes! wishing for it again right now:) beautiful beautiful comment!