Wishing soft for silken wrapping
Layered binding, clean and hidden
As I surrender usual systems
Allowing death of self.
Response to 'cocoon', the prompt this week at OSI
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'Don't be satisfied with the stories that come before you... Mevlana Celaleddin Rumi
8 comments:
Oh to be hidden and to surrender and come back new and light. Lovely, lovely poem.
Beautifully cocooned words, Julia...:)
If only...
No you don't have to. trust me..
Mmmm new and light does sound good Sandy...hope you are having a lovely time away:)
Thank you Amity...yes, a little cocooned time out, if only!
And Ramesh :) I rarely trust a man who says 'trust me':P ...but I am wondering what you mean...
Surrender usual systems
allowing death?
I think not.
Death is Yes - in any case.
Intriguing piece! Nice work!
imagine a place so soft, so hidden, that it is safe to release all that is prepared to fall like petals, like rain.
Beautiful, beautiful poem!
:D Harshad...allowing the little death maybe:)
Thank you Tumblewords
Gabrielle!
yes! wishing for it again right now:) beautiful beautiful comment!
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