Confidence
Lust
Enchantedness
Curiosity
Bliss
Pride and ecstasy
Enthusiasm
Exuberance
And Excitability
Waxen Wings
Something in the steady beat of love
Lifts me differently
Response to this weeks OSI prompt Icarus
Monday, 7 June 2010
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Lovely list leading to a strong (and beautifully positive) ending. Interesting take on the prompt.
A gentle song. Nicely done.
Waxen Wings... so what?
Liked this poem.
An uplifting poem...I really enjoyed this.
can confidence be a waxen wing.. well, liked your take on the prompt.. very uniquely interpreted..
I liked how you did it. Much to think..
help me rewrite Greek tragedies
Also, please do hop on the Monday Poetry Train
That's quite a list of descriptors there. I think you captured the full gamet. Though the thought of love being something totally different is powerful. Nicely done.
Oh, yes, indeed. Well done.
I love the last line! we've all had our wax wing moments, haven't we? thanks!
Thank you everyone!
Nicely done, like it very much!
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